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Blew the one funny moment

You would've had something with that distant shot of nobody being there, but it should have been the last shot of the guy, not the second-to-last. Poor comedic timing there.

Va10r65 responds:

It was originally only gonna be an audio submission and i was higer than a satellite when i made it soooooo thank you?

Strengths Trump Weaknesses

I like how you used your weakness in animation and spun it to your favor. I think it worked to an extent. The only downside is that all talk and little movement really hurts the pace...it's fine early on, but I think it goes on a bit too long.

The humor was great though...I think you did a great job breathing life into this through your writing and voiceovers.

I'm not going to dissuade you from this animation style if it's your angle, but it might help to polish it up a bit, or maybe just try to keep them short enough that the lack of animation doesn't begin to wear on anyone's attention.

Crendor responds:

I like what you're saying. I'll definitely consider this.

Sweet

Awesome job, folks. It was like a nostalgia trip, with a 21st century twist. =)

That was a good laugh!

Awesome work, sir! I got a good laugh out of the overdramaticized moments. Nice, smooth and gets the job done.

My only complaint would be the sound...it's a little harsh, maybe too compressed?

D-manfamous responds:

i was thinking the same thing when i watched it on here

One Thing's For Certain...

I admire the patience of anyone who can produce a frame-by-frame animation...especially one that reveals one detail per frame.

GlueyMcGee responds:

Hahaha:D
Thanks a lot!

You've Gotta Be Kidding Me...

1.7755! This might pass???

No offense, but I've seen better stuff try to get into the Portal that got shot down.

Another Mixed Bag, with less of the good stuff...

This feels like a step down from the originals. Serge's Subway short I can watch over and over, and Joanime's Mobile Ave. is cute and funny (Trinity never looked better!) Agent Training was a bit bland, while LF's Twins was okay, though it's a major letdown compared to Final Fight. Then there's The Siege, which tries way too hard and does nothing to wrap up this second package of Matrix shorts. On another note, that high-pitched british accent is REALLY starting to get on my nerves...LF, for the love of God PLEASE stop with that voice!

Individual Scores:

Agent Training: 6/10
Subway: 9/10
Twins: 6/10
Mobile Ave: 10/10
The Siege: 3/10

LegendaryFrog responds:

To bad I dind't use a high pitched english voice in this movie.

It's Potential!

If not for the fact that there seems to be some depth to this, I would probably give it a zero. But lo! There is potential here! Work on your animation and art skills, add more sound (some background music, too), and you could have something big here! It doesn't even have to be longer than what it is! Keep trying!

Nyyght responds:

Thanks. ^.o I think you'll be pleasantly suprized by the next one. ^-^ Hope you'll let me know your thoughts when I finish and post it.

Clearly, a winner is me.

Age 40, Male

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Plymouth State University

New Hampshire

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